I will be posting this anywhere that I believe I can obtain responses on how to improve my ad and eliminate what doesn't work.
Please be honest and provide any "constructive" criticism and/or Advice!
Heres how my ad looks now......
Subject line: I will build YOUR downline FREE, Get in right now/urgent!
Text Body:
This Program is SCREAMING with Momentum...
I will build YOUR downline FREE!
I've received some questions asking me why I'd do something as bold as building YOUR downline FREE...
The simple answer is because I know that money is nothing more than the
"applause" you get for helping others. The more people I help, the more money I will earn myself, It's simple economics! I aim to help as many people as possible... AND IT WORKS!
Join My Team Now and You'll SEE FOR YOURSELF why MY Downline team members are achieving FAST and Powerful growth!
One of my Enrollees has already made the "Leaders Board for this month!"
See why every 2 minutes People from all over the world are JUMPING ON BOARD... Visit this site to see for yourself:
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It will never get any easier than this...
I rarely ever endorse a program through ALL of my advertising outlets.
ProBuildersPlus has me so excited though that I'm Pulling out all the stops -
This is a "No Holds Barred" year, I and my upline are building the downline for
all who join our team!
Here's what I'm going to do when you join me in ProBuildersPlus...
Everyone I enroll in ProBuildersPlus will be positioned down ONE of 2 lines of
my organization... one directly below another, below another, etc.
That means everyone I enroll after you will go below you and will count toward YOUR commissions!
Normally I wouldn't do this but because I would LOVE to see you get off to a
prosperous start in 2006, I'm giving you income from everyone who enrolls after you do!
Go here now before everyone else does to secure your position above them:
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Now, here's the quick facts about ProBuildersPlus which I believe in 100% and am earning a monthly passive residual income...
ProBuildersPlus is SKYROCKETING past every other biz op site in the world
because of their unique program.
The reason it's EXPLODING around the world is because it's so incredibly SIMPLE, you start FREE, and My team is incredibly motivated to make you successful, OUR SUCCESS depends on YOUR SUCCESS!
If you can follow 3 simple steps like I have, YOU can be a success too:
Step 1: Enroll for a Free Trial at no cost and receive Pre-enrolles to your
downline, with no obligation. Your benefit of joining with me is that I "AND"
those above me will build YOUR downline team...
Step 2: Simply follow our simple step-by-step system
Step 3: Earn residual income on all the Pre-Enrollees who upgrade and remain in your ProBuildersPlus downline.
Go to my website now and you can enroll for a Free Trial.
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My advice is to drop everything and do this right now because the people who jump on this email first, will get positioned ABOVE those who wait. (And will earn the most money because of the customers I put below you.)
Sincerely,
Chris Lonergan
PS
This could be your only chance to take advantage of my "heavy-hitter"
positioning on the Internet. Secure your spot now and let me show you what's possible when you're in the right place at the right time!
Remember, those that "ACT FIRST" Leap frog above everyone else in
my Downline - some literally Upgrade their membershipinstantly
after enrolling for free because they see it and they get it!
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Please be honest and provide any "constructive" criticism and/or Advice!
Heres how my ad looks now......
Subject line: I will build YOUR downline FREE, Get in right now/urgent!
Text Body:
This Program is SCREAMING with Momentum...
I will build YOUR downline FREE!
I've received some questions asking me why I'd do something as bold as building YOUR downline FREE...
The simple answer is because I know that money is nothing more than the
"applause" you get for helping others. The more people I help, the more money I will earn myself, It's simple economics! I aim to help as many people as possible... AND IT WORKS!
Join My Team Now and You'll SEE FOR YOURSELF why MY Downline team members are achieving FAST and Powerful growth!
One of my Enrollees has already made the "Leaders Board for this month!"
See why every 2 minutes People from all over the world are JUMPING ON BOARD... Visit this site to see for yourself:
<!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm">http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm</a><!-- m -->
It will never get any easier than this...
I rarely ever endorse a program through ALL of my advertising outlets.
ProBuildersPlus has me so excited though that I'm Pulling out all the stops -
This is a "No Holds Barred" year, I and my upline are building the downline for
all who join our team!
Here's what I'm going to do when you join me in ProBuildersPlus...
Everyone I enroll in ProBuildersPlus will be positioned down ONE of 2 lines of
my organization... one directly below another, below another, etc.
That means everyone I enroll after you will go below you and will count toward YOUR commissions!
Normally I wouldn't do this but because I would LOVE to see you get off to a
prosperous start in 2006, I'm giving you income from everyone who enrolls after you do!
Go here now before everyone else does to secure your position above them:
<!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm">http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm</a><!-- m -->
Now, here's the quick facts about ProBuildersPlus which I believe in 100% and am earning a monthly passive residual income...
ProBuildersPlus is SKYROCKETING past every other biz op site in the world
because of their unique program.
The reason it's EXPLODING around the world is because it's so incredibly SIMPLE, you start FREE, and My team is incredibly motivated to make you successful, OUR SUCCESS depends on YOUR SUCCESS!
If you can follow 3 simple steps like I have, YOU can be a success too:
Step 1: Enroll for a Free Trial at no cost and receive Pre-enrolles to your
downline, with no obligation. Your benefit of joining with me is that I "AND"
those above me will build YOUR downline team...
Step 2: Simply follow our simple step-by-step system
Step 3: Earn residual income on all the Pre-Enrollees who upgrade and remain in your ProBuildersPlus downline.
Go to my website now and you can enroll for a Free Trial.
<!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm">http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm</a><!-- m -->
My advice is to drop everything and do this right now because the people who jump on this email first, will get positioned ABOVE those who wait. (And will earn the most money because of the customers I put below you.)
Sincerely,
Chris Lonergan
PS
This could be your only chance to take advantage of my "heavy-hitter"
positioning on the Internet. Secure your spot now and let me show you what's possible when you're in the right place at the right time!
Remember, those that "ACT FIRST" Leap frog above everyone else in
my Downline - some literally Upgrade their membershipinstantly
after enrolling for free because they see it and they get it!
<!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm">http://thinkink.mybigsuccess.com/?SOURCE=afftlkfrm</a><!-- m -->